On embers I dwell
Mistaken, misinterpreted, misunderstood,
On embers I dwell
I am the beast, the cynic,
ostracized from hell.
Hate, Anger, Claw and fangs
Aren’t the only things,
Hidden somewhere within this beast,
Are bruised and broken wings.
They decreed me dangerous,
And sequestered my smile
You seethed the venom in me
till my muse turned violet and vile
Kindle my abode with words,
Burn it down with bellows,
Soon within your hearts will be a cenotaph,
Uncontrolled my memories will grow.
posted by Sujay Sukumar at 3:36 PM
19 Comments:
Sujay, sometimes you scare me. This post belongs in a book of occult poetry. enjoyed reading it but makes one wonder who or what you really are....hmmmm...
T-> I'm yet to figure out who I am, myself. I wrote the whole poem metaphorically, glad to know that u liked it.
WOW, so i dropped in to c wat else u write or write bout...& this is on another tangent--alltogether, very well composed!!! ((accolades)) and uve definitly got an ill~skill with a keyboard...bravados!
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saif -> Hey thanks bud. Keep coming back !!
Castor -> Hi Castor. Its me who owes u gratitude. Thanks for visiting, and thanks for the kind words. Would be great if u can reproduce your vision in color for all of us to enjoy.
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prathap -> aah! those were the days. Cant stop humming High Hopes by Pink floyd now...
The grass was greener,
The night was brighter,
With friends surrounded,
The days of wonder.
Very unique stuff .. astonishing evocation - transcending ordinary life & human frailty. I love dark sides ..
aria -> there is a dark side to everything. Denial, will not make it go away. Its always human fraility that waters seeds of dark.
Nice to know u enjoyed reading my poem. Visit again!
Bravo.
its excellent...
but one lil thought
u just gave importance to the beast inside
and what about the angel??
u wrote about the bruised and broken wings...
what about the crown and the throne??
can i wait for them???
Ye have written superbly here. I visited it the day ye uploaded it but didnt and still don't have the words to comment. Emerson will do -"Dreams and beasts are two keys by which we find out the keys to our own nature."
sophia-> there will be more of the angel, the beast was unintentional. Although bruised, the angel is still alive.
Nimbu -> thank you :)
White Magpie -> Although Emerson was a great choice. What I treasure most are your kind words. keep coming back.
i am glad that u r gonna make it
u put a smile on my face :-)
Amazing! What a power and hold your words have!! Darkness has never failed to entice me and when structured so nicely it packs quite the punch!! I'd love to read about the angel part too ;) Cheers man!
i am waiting for the angel!!!
prmod-> will write on that too soon. Glad u liked it.
Sophia -> thanks for ur patience.
spell bounding
known stranger -> thanks buddy. Nanri.
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