Yours, In all earnestness

I am the faint hearted angel,
The one that cries as you sleep,
Who hopes that you’ll never know,
that it’s not for me that I weep.
My shoulder, my hands, my heart
I offer unto you in eagerness
My tear, my smile, my sympathy
Were yours in all earnestness.
The cries of a thousand Gods deafened me,
I turned to see an infant cry.
The divine candescence that blinded me
Was a rusty lantern in a poor man’s shack
I gleefully painted your colorful dreams,
Long after the bedtime story,
I returned the tears I wiped off your cheek
As dewdrops on the morning glory
A butterfly alit upon my shoulder
A rainbow adorned the sky,
Everything changed and it hurts no more
For now, I chanced to see your smile.
Afternote: I dedicate this poem to Sophia Prakash who probed me to think in these lines.
21 Comments:
i am overwhelmed...
i feel like flying in the air
no wings..but still
lovely sujay...
Thank you, for the acknowledgement, I'm happy my effort pleased you.
We dont need wings to fly, we only need to close our eyes...d'you agree?
yeah absolutely
we dont need wings to fly
i came here to read it agn...
u made my day sujay
Such beautiful words. I love the opening lines.
"I returned the tears I wiped off your cheek
As dewdrops on the morning glory"
very beautiful lines. :)
"The divine candescence that blinded me
Was a rusty lantern in a poor man’s shack"
Beautiful poem .. but these lines were simply amazing ..
sophia -> U flatter me.
eating_poetry -> thanks. the first verse establishes that the speaker is poignant and sacrificial. Its a natural element of unconditional love.
blow -> thanks. The lines you liked also happen to be my personal favourite lines.
aria -> the lines you mention are metaphorical of the significance and value that little things hold, for the speaker.
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amazing
Known stranger -> thank you.
Do we know each other Stranger? *wink*. Glad to have u on my blog, Keep coming back!!!
oh thank you buddy... it was nice of your comment.
Seriously! this should console the most faint hearted and sorrowful angel!! Very beautifully written :)
Prmod -> Thank you. All the very best for your upcoming exams.
beautiful. you really write well.
echos -> thank you. Welcome to my blog. visit again!
wonderful pictures and beautiful words! Thanks for dropping by my blog! :)
The cries of a thousand Gods deafened me...lovely words.
Prerona -> Thank you for dropping by too :)
Nice to know that u liked the pictures and the words. Keep coming back!!
Ph -> I beleive you call yourself Phantasmagoria. Wow!! cool name. Dreamlike imagery huh?
Keep coming back.
Knowing that angel, I feel that she deserves these words.
Lovely poem, sujay !
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