Monday, April 17, 2006

Yours, In all earnestness


I am the faint hearted angel,
The one that cries as you sleep,
Who hopes that you’ll never know,
that it’s not for me that I weep.

My shoulder, my hands, my heart
I offer unto you in eagerness
My tear, my smile, my sympathy
Were yours in all earnestness.

The cries of a thousand Gods deafened me,
I turned to see an infant cry.
The divine candescence that blinded me
Was a rusty lantern in a poor man’s shack

I gleefully painted your colorful dreams,
Long after the bedtime story,
I returned the tears I wiped off your cheek
As dewdrops on the morning glory

A butterfly alit upon my shoulder
A rainbow adorned the sky,
Everything changed and it hurts no more
For now, I chanced to see your smile.


Afternote: I dedicate this poem to Sophia Prakash who probed me to think in these lines.

21 Comments:

Blogger che sara sara said...

i am overwhelmed...
i feel like flying in the air
no wings..but still
lovely sujay...

10:11 PM  
Blogger Sujay Sukumar said...

Thank you, for the acknowledgement, I'm happy my effort pleased you.

We dont need wings to fly, we only need to close our eyes...d'you agree?

1:16 AM  
Blogger che sara sara said...

yeah absolutely
we dont need wings to fly
i came here to read it agn...
u made my day sujay

8:58 AM  
Blogger EATING POETRY said...

Such beautiful words. I love the opening lines.

9:46 AM  
Blogger jugni said...

"I returned the tears I wiped off your cheek
As dewdrops on the morning glory"

very beautiful lines. :)

2:28 PM  
Blogger aria said...

"The divine candescence that blinded me
Was a rusty lantern in a poor man’s shack"

Beautiful poem .. but these lines were simply amazing ..

3:01 PM  
Blogger Sujay Sukumar said...

sophia -> U flatter me.

eating_poetry -> thanks. the first verse establishes that the speaker is poignant and sacrificial. Its a natural element of unconditional love.

5:02 PM  
Blogger Sujay Sukumar said...

blow -> thanks. The lines you liked also happen to be my personal favourite lines.

aria -> the lines you mention are metaphorical of the significance and value that little things hold, for the speaker.

5:06 PM  
Blogger Known Stranger said...

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5:08 PM  
Blogger Known Stranger said...

amazing

5:09 PM  
Blogger Sujay Sukumar said...

Known stranger -> thank you.
Do we know each other Stranger? *wink*. Glad to have u on my blog, Keep coming back!!!

6:26 PM  
Blogger Known Stranger said...

oh thank you buddy... it was nice of your comment.

9:24 AM  
Blogger Prmod Bafna said...

Seriously! this should console the most faint hearted and sorrowful angel!! Very beautifully written :)

12:06 AM  
Blogger Sujay Sukumar said...

Prmod -> Thank you. All the very best for your upcoming exams.

11:36 AM  
Blogger Echoes said...

beautiful. you really write well.

3:47 PM  
Blogger Sujay Sukumar said...

echos -> thank you. Welcome to my blog. visit again!

3:59 PM  
Blogger Prerona said...

wonderful pictures and beautiful words! Thanks for dropping by my blog! :)

1:34 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

The cries of a thousand Gods deafened me...lovely words.

4:33 AM  
Blogger Sujay Sukumar said...

Prerona -> Thank you for dropping by too :)

Nice to know that u liked the pictures and the words. Keep coming back!!

1:10 PM  
Blogger Sujay Sukumar said...

Ph -> I beleive you call yourself Phantasmagoria. Wow!! cool name. Dreamlike imagery huh?

Keep coming back.

1:21 PM  
Blogger jac said...

Knowing that angel, I feel that she deserves these words.

Lovely poem, sujay !

9:01 PM  

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